■ Direction· Task 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words.
· Task 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
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INTERNATIONAL ENGLISH LANGUAGE TESTING SYSTEM WRITING ANSWER BOOKLET Candidate Name:텍스트 | Candidate Number:텍스트 | Centre Number:텍스트1 | Date:텍스트1 |
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Topic ▼
Some students work while studying. This
often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under
pressure.
What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest? |
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Your Answer ▼
The number
of students who are studying out of their hometown has been increasing
recently. For that reason, the trend had changed like Students aren’t in a
limitation and trying tries to see the further and wide world. Due to this situation,
students are working while they are studying. There are many problems caused
because of this issue.
First,
the general grade of the university has been declined. (문장을 연결해주세요) Since students are doing two
things at the same time. Physically, they don’t have enough time to study even
though they manage their time very well. If there is a group work, most students
can’t control their schedule therefore, many groups get low grades than they can. The bad circulation continues like if they are poor, they have to
study at the same time they will be lack time for studying, which means that
they can never get a better grade whether they stop working.
Second,
the gap between the rich and poor is expanding. The rich can use their all-time
as studying(문장을 끊어주세요) however, the one who has to earn money to live, don’t have
sufficient time to study. Unfortunately, the scholarship is provided for students
who have excellent grades, which means that the ones who really need scholarships
are in unfavorable conditions. Moreover, if there is a field trip, the poor can’t
join it because of the part-time job or lack of money.
To solve
this problem, I believe that the schools should expand the range of getting the
scholarship and changing change the requirement. For instance, not only considering
their school grade but also checking their property. |
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채점 기준 | TR (Task Response) | CC (Coherence and Cohesion) | LR (Lexical Resource) | GRA (Grammatical Range and Accuracy) | Total |
Score (9점 만점) | 4 | 5 | 5 | 5 | 5 |
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