The bar chart illustrates profits from the
export between 2015 and 2016, dividing divided into five sections of goods. The table
below shows the precise portion variations from 2015 to 2016. Overall, it is
noteworthy that petroleum products and engineered gods accounted for the
majority of export revenues considered the whole product on aggregate.
There was a remarkable change during the 1-year period that 15.24% of textiles surged in conjunction with the dramatic growth of engineered goods to 8.5%. Although the extent to which the country had financial benefits was approximately 30 billion dollars in 2016, the change of proportion was more voluminous than that of petroleum products, which only increased 3% compared to the anterior year.
On the other hand, the sole part: gems and
jewellery plunged alone. Nevertheless, the change of rate was not negligible in
that the decrease was nearly 5% and this section was the third in terms of export earnings both in 2015 and
in 2016.
총평: (7/8/7/8) 7.5
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