The pie charts provide information concerning high school students' dream jobs by gender after graduating from school.
Overall, it is clear that all male and female students who responded to this research had both contrary tendencies and similar wants about their future occupations.
It is noteworthy that the biggest gap between men and women's preference for dream jobs was seen in doctors by 24 percentage points 24%. These figures were 32% and 8%, respectively. ( 신경써서 조언해주신부분 고쳐봤는데요.. 남자와 여자들의 직업선호의 가장큰 갭은 의사에서 보여지고 24프로만큼 차이가 난다' 를 의도했는데요.. 수정만 해주셔도 좋고 혹시 알맞는 표현 일러주시면 정말 감사하겠습니다.. (의미 자체는 잘 전달해주셨는데 24% 라고 작성하면 잘못된 분석이 되어버립니다. 24%와 24 percentage points 는 수학적으로 전혀 다른 사항이고, 의도하신 바를 정확하게 표현하시려면 후자를 사용해주셔야 합니다.) In addition, 24% of female students reported that their most preferred job is a teacher, while just 6% of men chose this job. Also, 21% of a male wanted to be an athlete in contrast to only a minority of women responded to this job as what they hope to become (5%) (괄호를 쓰면 문장을 쉽게 구성할 수 있는 건 맞습니다. 그러나 딱 거기까지일 뿐입니다. 괄호를 사용하지 않으면서 다양한 표현으로 문장을 만들 수 있는 능력을 채점관들에게 보여주셔야 GRA 에서 유리한 고지를 접할 수 있어요.). On the other hand, there was a relatively even distribution about becoming a dentist, showing 17% of men and 23% of women, and a laywer, in which 21% of females and 12% males preferred to become lawyers. |