Nowadays, people have to survive from so many competitions such as study, sports and so on since elementary students. Some people argue that teacher should teach how to compete while others claim that juvenile are taught about how to relate with companions. I strongly believe that for children, live in harmony is more useful way to become good adults than fight with friends. This essay will discuss the both of the views and my opinions of the latter.
To begin with, There are some advantages of competing, it could be useful when they are adults, because society is collection of contest. For example, when I worked in a company. One of the coworkers always needed my assistance, so I helped him even though I had a lot of my works and he did not help my work when I needed him support. Finally, he got a promotion early than me, because he could finished many works by me. If I did not help him, I could have promoted instead of him. Thus, society is cruel to people who do not know about competition.
On the other hand, children who are thought to work together are more likely to be good adults in personality. They have more good mind than people who grew up in competitive circumstances. In my opinion, there is no humanism to encourage children to compete each others. Human instinct is always want to collaborate with others. According to researchers, Human beings feel happy and satisfaction, when they think living in a harmony. Finally, they who grow up in co-operative society could become good character adults.
Overall, the both sides of the topic have their own strong points but I agree with the latter. The more co-operation children learn the more good adults they will become. |