Young people are often influenced in their behavior and situations by others in the same age. This is called “peer pressure”. Do the disadvantages of peer pressure outweigh the advantages.
Peer pressure which means that young people can be influenced their situations and behavior easily by friends has been one of the most heated discussions as if it has more advantages these days. Although it has several benefits in that youngsters become motivated in a better way from others, peer pressure has some drawbacks as kids comparing themselves with others which can lead to a drop in self-esteem and a loss in losing individuality.
First of all, peer pressure leads kids to compare themselves with others. In the stage of adolescence, comparing with other people is risky because it drops the self-esteem. This is because the circumstances that they cannot afford it make them more weaker and smaller than other students. For instance, if students who cannot follow the trend and feel difference among them, they are isolated from the groups and this may cause serious mental problems.
Secondly, since young people are affected by others easily, it may lead to a loss of lose individuality. This is because most of the young follow their trends of fashion, makeup and hair style so that eventually it looks same. For instance, these days, the most hit item among the teenagers is putting on clothes of luxury brands and dying only bang hair so it is easy to find the similar looking groups of teenagers on the street. It is quite important to form their own identity in that ages, but peer pressure disturbs them from developing to develop it.
To sum up, peer pressure has some positive sides such as being motivated from others students in good ways. However, it has some disadvantages such as making comparisons comparing with others which can lead to a loss in lose self-esteem and isolation isolated from the groups and peer pressure makes every students looks the same so that it may cause to losing the loss in identity.
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