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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. This is because if particular species of plants and animals disappear, it affects whole world including people. In earth, there is environmental prey nets which mean each species eat another species and are eaten by other. When one species of animals is extinguished, the number of other species that are defeated by them will be growing exclusively. This makes the prey nets out of order and ecosystem needs much time to recover it.
Others claim that there are more important environmental problems such as air pollution and water pollution. For example, air is crippled because many people utilize cars on the way to their houses and companies much. This lets people with illness leave urban cities and go to rural ones for their health. Second example of other environmental problems is water pollution. Much of oil and garbage goes into the river and this takes marine animals to death. Furthermore, people cannot swim in the river and the river changes beautiful nature into garbage needed recovering.
I think more intensive environmental problems exist than the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Air pollution is the most severe environmental problem in the world. For example, I live in Korea now and atmosphere of air is getting worse because of fine dust. In spring, I cannot imagine doing outside activities and vertilize my room. Korean are accustomed to wearing masks due to the dust even before COVID 19 outbreak. When the percentage of fine dust goes high, I have a headache and sore throat all day. Breathing is a fundamental source of life and people have rights to go outside freely without any masks. Therefore, I believe air pollution is more important problem than the loss of particular species of plants and animals and we need to do our bests for clean air condition.