The diagrams depicts the process about how frozen fish pies are produced. In general overall, a fish pie includes four ingredients and is manufactured through two production lines.
Turning to the details, a frozen fish pie consists of peas, fish, potato and sauce with packed in microwaveable container. As for one production line, potatoes are moved during, for up to one month and washed. The peeled potatoes are sliced and boiled. The next steps is from chilling to storing and then the production line is connected to the other line.
The other line is about fresh salmon, which takes 12 hours and less from being delivered (다이어그램 유형에서는 이처럼 수동의 활용이 매우 중요합니다.) to adding lemon juice and salt. A few employees divide salmons with skin and bones and exam the results. After the process, inspected salmons add prepared peas and sauces and meet stored potatoes. The combination of salmons and potatoes are wrapped and freezed put in freezing . The frozen fish pies are dispatched and the remaining are saved.
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