Some people think that governments should spend as much money as possible conducting research in the ocean. Others , however, believe that they should spend this money in places where it is needed more.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is true that some critics blame that spending a lot of money on conducting ocean research is helpful of the entire improvement of our daily life. However, others argue that investing this fund into other sectors that really need this money is better are really needed. I will highlight the two divergent views and suggest my own opinion.
To begin with, doing necessary research on marine lifestyle is essential to protect our life from famine. To be specific, by investing numerous funds, one day, supplemantary eatery can be founded by scientists so that people would not have to do not seek for suitable foods in order to sustain their lives. Additionally, conducting proper ocean research can be helpful of undeveloped continents such as Africa. Those areas countries have still struggled with a lack of foods since the era of the industrial revolution. With the development of marine research, this hunger can be effectively resolved soon.
Nevertheless, investing other sectors is better than spending ocean research. To secure citizen's life, this fund should be mainly used to build medical centre or buil nursing home. By spending numerous funds on these sectors, the gap between the poors and the wealthys (이전 글에서도 이거 틀리셨는데 이번 기회에 확실히 익혀주세요~) can be diminished rapidly, then prevent people's life from social riots. Eventually, investing proper social goods is more contributed to social compromisation than investing marine research.
TO To sum up, although seeking supplemantary foods conducted by ocean research seems to be desirable, I personally think that by spending social goods upgrade needy's life on the whole and have a pivotal role to become the unity in our society. (이 문장은 살짝 꼬인 것 같은데 댓글 한번 주세요!)
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