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According th to the topic, the percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years.
I have a three reasons about that.
The first reason is that mordern society is being busy. People like simple thing in their life, because they have work hard. So,Therefore(So는 문장 앞에 쓰면 좋지 않아요)they can't take care of their children. In these days, a lot of parents have a job, so, it is affected to affects their children.
The second reason,Secondly, children like fast food, frozen food than vegetable and fruit and fresh food. For example, they like Pizza, hamburger, Fry fried chicken. It is bad to their body.
The thrid reason,Lastly children playing play the computer game during their leisure time. They haven't to get exercise than before. They don' have enough time to exercise than before. It is make a overweight too.
makes children overweight. If they eating eat too much fast food and haven't get don' do enough exercise, they will be overweight. It is serious problem in our society. Overweight is very dangerous in our body. It makes a lot of disease, for example, Diabetes.Osteoporosis, Lose their hair. i.e. It will affects to our future generation.
We need to solution about increasing overweight children rates.
In my opinion, our society more careful than before to children. need to care on children more than before Their parents should be interesting their have some interest on their children's life. For example, parents should be make a food for their children, have spend time to conversation with their children about school life and leisure time.
Also, the school should make more physical class than now and then lasting check children's body situation.
In conclusion, children are very important in our society. They will lead our future society. It means, they are our future. We have to care them. |