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Some parents in some regions of the US want
to a curfew to their children. (~하고 싶어한다는 것은 중요하지 않고, 이 curfew 는 이미 시행이 된 사항이기 때문에 이쪽에 맞춰주셔야 합니다.) The curfew means that teenage children are
required to stay at home from a specific time at night by their parents unless
they go out with an adult.
Some people argue I believe that children should be protected by implementing a the parents should have some control on their children like curfew because
they are still growing up mentally and physically. To be more specific, they
need parents’ help because of lack of judgment and self-control. According to a
survey conducted by Seoul Nation University, more than 70 percentage of juvenile
delinquency acquired late at night. Moreover, children can be easily exposed to
great danger especially when they are out at night. (이 두 문장은 서로 완벽하게 같은 말을 하고 있습니다. 즉, 반복할 필요가 없는 거죠. 이를 대신해서 저 위험들이 어떠한 양상으로 이루어지는지 정도는 적어주셔야 합니다.)
On the other hand, some people state that
parents should not oppress their children too much including curfew when they
are teenagers. In stead of oppressing, parents should be able to come up with a
compromise such as a promise to their children when they will come home. It makes
children to develop for their independency and responsibility when it comes to
keeping promises. For example, when I was a teenager, my mom had a hard time
with finding compromises, my mom told me to come home by 9 p.m. without asking my
opinion. however, at that time I lie to my mom because I wanted to hang out with
my friends longer. Therefore, too strong rules create the conflict between
parents and children. (여기에 대해서는 총평에서 말씀드리겠습니다.)
In conclusion, the curfew has pros and
cons. The the pros of a curfew is to prevent preventing children from being victims by going out at night.
The cons is provoking conflicts between parents and children. As far as I am
concerned, the curfew is needed for children.
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