The bar graph below shows the percentage of people that said they regularly enjoyed certain sports from 1985 to 2005.
The bar chart below describes the percentage of people who enjoyed particular sports from 1985 to 2005.
Overall, a preference for all activities showed a steady decrease or increase excluding swimming on a yearly basis. A percentage of most activities finally increased in 2005, except for baseball.
A preference for football in 2005 was significantly higher than before, while it continually increased from 1985 to 2000 little by little. It peaked at the highest percentage in 2005 at 60%, which is 35% points higher than in 2000. Golf and winter sports such as skiing and snowboarding also showed a continuous rising tendency, but the average annual gap was bigger in golf compared to winter sports. Although the percentage of people enjoyed baseball steadily declined from 1985 to 2005, the chart has shown that baseball was the most popular activity in 1985. Swimming, which shows a fluctuation of percentage different from other activities, has never been the first place, whereas it took the last place at 25% in 2005 with baseball.
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