Your Answer ▼ The bar charts illustrate the proportion of male and female in employment in three different countries (Canada, South Korea and Sweden) in 2005 and 2015. Overall, compared to both charts, the rates increased while Swedish men's employment rates dropped in 2015. Looking at the details, the percentages of men's employment were higher than those of women's in all three countries in 2005 and 2015. However, The percentages of Swedish men's employment decreased from about 78% in 2005 to 70% in 2015, that is the only a drop in compared charts. The percentages of South Korean men's employment increased from 75% in 2005 to about 78% in 2015, then those were being the highest rate by one sex in three countries. In contrast, the percentages of female employment in South Korea were the lowest rate in both year. As can be seen in the charts, in Canada had a significant increase in female's employment rates from around 38% in 2005 to about 55% in 2015.
목표 6.0 / 6월까지 / 22분 / 163자 지난번 결과를 참고해서 작성하려고 노력하였는데, 헷갈리는 부분이 있어 질문합니다. 1. 비율이나 수치를 비교할 때, 반복적으로 percentage 등이 나오는데 어느 경우에는 그 비율을 계속 주어로 쓰고, 어느 경우에는 그냥 그 나라/대상으로 쓸 수 있던데 어떻게 생각하면 될까요?
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