The table compares the quantities of beef exported from five different countries between 2012 and 2016.
Overall, it is clear that Brazil sold the most huge amount of beef abroad, while Scandinabian countries had the lowest figures for it across 3 years.
Looking at the table closely, one can see that there was a steady increase in the amount of beef exported from Brazil and it stands out as the most popular beef during the whole period in question. (브라질 관련 구체적인 수치를 넣어주시면 됩니다.) Uruguay was second with around 40,000 tonnes of export exportion. The quantity of beef exported from Japan also saw a considerable rise from 224 to 1,000 tonnes.
On the other hand, other two countries reletavely exported a the small amount of beef. Particularly, Switzerland's exports fluctuated around only 20 tonnes. However, Norway's figure shot up from 34 to 81 tonnes in 2014 before it fell to 17 tonnes and was overtook by Swizerland at the end of the period (꺾은선 그래프가 아닌 경우에는 굳이 순서 역전을 다룰 필요없습니다.)
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