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To whom it may concern,
Hello, my name is Ian Jeong. I am writing this email to inquire of an opening for a part-time server in Vancouver Hotel restaurant. I am looking for a part-time job for this summer vacation, this job is what I have been looking for last few weeks.
To begin with, I have experiece that working as a full-time server for 3 years at Burnaby restaurant. I quitted it to study, but I always miss working at the restaurants. I am good at customer services such as taking orders and cleaning the floors. I am also able to work as a team.
I have a couple of questions. First, I wonder that what work I would take for this position. I want to know the job responsiblities. Also, I want to know the jobs condition such as working hours and wage. I attached my availabilities.
I hope to get your reply sooner.
Thank you.
Sincerely,
Ian Jeong