■ Direction· Task 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words.
· Task 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
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INTERNATIONAL ENGLISH LANGUAGE TESTING SYSTEM WRITING ANSWER BOOKLET Candidate Name: 눈누 | Candidate Number:텍스트 | Centre Number:텍스트1 | Date:텍스트1 |
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In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study aboard. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? |
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There are pros and cons for the opinion whether student's studying abroad is beneficial to themselves. However, in my opinion, it is necessary for schools to encourage the students to do a university degree in foreign country, considering students broaden their view point to see the world. It can be said that schools' encouraging the students to study in foreign country is not a selection but a necessity in the aspect that students can experience various culture from other country. One the one hand, student's studying abroad can cause students to moan under the financial burden. Even though there are other factors for it, nothing is more fundamental factor than studying abroad. According to Dr. Kim, one of the most distinguished professors at Chungnam University in Korea, over 85.2% of the Korean students, who have studied graphic design in the University in the USA, suffered from higher living coast and tuition fee, accelerating financial burden. It shows how strongly studying abroad affect student's financial status a negative way. On the other hand, student's studying abroad can make it possible for students to broaden their view point to see the world. Despite the fact that studying abroad is not the only element for it, it is the most invaluable opportunity that can bring about student's various cultural experiences in other countries. Let's take 'Happy Together', the exchange student program in Hanbat University in Korea to show how strongly student's studying abroad affects their view point to see the world as an example. The program has contributed to increasing the number of students studying bachelor's degree in the UK. As a result, the most student could experience a variety of British culture. As we can see in the example, studying abroad can play a significant role in students broadening the view point to see the world. Hence, there is no doubt that schools should not hesitate to encourage the students to do a university degree in foreign country. In conclusion, student's studying abroad can be considered the positive aspect of the issue, and thus schools should put the emphasis on encouraging the students to do a university degree in foreign country.
빨간색으로 친 부분이 제가 생각해도 좀 어색하다고 느껴집니다... role in~ 뒤에 명사가 들어와야할 것 같은데 뭐라고 들어가는 게 좋을까요? |
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채점 기준 | TR (Task Response) | CC (Coherence and Cohesion) | LR (Lexical Resource) | GRA (Grammatical Range and Accuracy) | Total |
Score (9점 만점) | 6 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 6 |
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유학에 대한 장단점을 논리적이고 설득력 있는 예시를 곁들여 잘 작성해주신 좋은 글입니다. 중간에 어색한 부분에 대해 언급해주셨는데 이 경우 broaden을 동명사화시켜 명사로 바꿔주시면 좀 더 자연스럽게 문장이 연결될 수 있습니다. 수고하셨습니다.