■ Direction· Task 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words.
· Task 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
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INTERNATIONAL ENGLISH LANGUAGE TESTING SYSTEM WRITING ANSWER BOOKLET Candidate Name:텍스트 | Candidate Number:텍스트 | Centre Number:텍스트1 | Date:텍스트1 |
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The following chart give the information about the changes that took place in three different ways of crime in Newport city centre in the period of 2003 to 2012. Overall, one can see that the number of burglary drastically plummeted in 2004 to 2008. Even though the number of car theft showed the decrease decreasing trend in 2005 to 2006, it saw steady growth rate after 2006. Evident is that the number of robbery remained stable in given period. Looking at the chart more closely, one can see that the largest decrease rate is seen in the number of burglary, declining by around 2500 between 2004 to 2008. The number of burglary showed the higest figure in 2003 to 2006. Interestingly, the number of car theft exceeded that of burglary in 2007, reaching over 2000. In 2005 to 2006, the number of car theft dipped by around 1000. After 2006, the number of car theft steadly went up, reaching around 2500 in 2012. Moreover, the number of robbery always shows the lowest figure at under 1000 in given period. |
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채점 기준 | TR (Task Response) | CC (Coherence and Cohesion) | LR (Lexical Resource) | GRA (Grammatical Range and Accuracy) | Total |
Score (9점 만점) | 6 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 6 |
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Task 1의 경우 이미지 파일을 첨부해주셔야 보다 정확한 첨삭이 가능합니다. 그렇지만 이 글의 경우 이미지 파일 없이 충분히 그 내용을 짐작 가능할 수 있도록 정확하고 자세하게 비교 분석해주신 좋은 글 써 주셨습니다. 수고하셨습니다.