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INTERNATIONAL ENGLISH LANGUAGE TESTING SYSTEM WRITING ANSWER BOOKLET
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Nowadays, people prefer to eat fast foods rather than well-prepared dishes because life is busy and those kinds of food can save time. It's easy and comfortable to consume. I agree with that opinion but there are plenty of side-effects of keeping consuming unhealthy food as our meal. First, I would like to talk about how fast food can affect badly to each person. If we consume that food frequently, that makes use to be obesity. It will hurt not only your body but also your mind. People need good nutrition to live a healthy life. For example, If students keep eating a lack of nutritious meals, they couldn't grow up properly and also do not have the energy to study. Not just only for the students but also everyone should eat healthily for maintaining activity and lively. Second, Fast food makes our society unhealthy and triggers some problems. The purpose of eating convenience food is to save time, so most people eat those alone. Eating a proper meal with other people is important to make people relax and be calm. Those feelings are crucial to living in this tough modern society. When we consume dishes with family or friends, we are talking with them so we can share our concerns and heart with them. In conclusion, I understand why people try to ingest junk food these days. However, we should get a healthy meal for protecting our health and make our society alive. | ||||
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