The two diagrams shows the alteration to Marlton Gallery.
Overall, it is clear that the gallery has transformed from the two-storey building with a roof garden into the three-storey buidling. Also noticeable was the addtion of parking lot, education center, coat room and the stairs.
Looking at the diagrams closely, one can see that the major change to gallery is the construction of the third floor. An education center has been built on the third floor. Whereas the media room that used to be on second floor was moved to the third floor, the coffee shop has remained its place. Special exhibition also was moved to the second floor with an expansion.
In addition, a lot of changes has happened on the first floor. The parking lot has been constructed replacing the special exhibition's place. A gift shop and a front desk have been reduced in size making room for a coat room and the stairs in between them.
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