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주제:
Art and music classes should not be mandatory at school.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
내용:
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Some people think that the Art and Music classes should not be mandatory at school.
Due to it is a waste of time to take these classes.
But I firmly believe that the Art and Music classes should be mandatory like Math and Science classes.
There are reasons why I need to them be mandatory.
First, learning things when we are young is much easier than when we old.
We do not need to use too much time to learn them. If the children learn the Art and Music at school, they can learn these more natural.
Second, if they only learn Math, Science, and English classes they cannot have a chance to find their talents of Art and Music.
I am sure that giving a chance to find their abilities in a variety of fields is really important.
In conclusion, taking the Art and Music classes will be definitely valuable for children.