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The importance of doing exercise has increased, and many people have interests in their health. In this regard, it is often argued that the Olympics can give them the motivation to do exercise. However, some people think that there can be the better way (그렇게까지 중요한 건 아니긴 한데, 논제에 따르면 복수형으로 가는 게 맞긴 합니다.) to do so. In this essay, I will discuss both views and present my opinion.
Actually, by simply watching the television for the Olympics, people can get energy to live their day and be motivated to do the same exercise as the athletes in the game perform do. For the ordinary people, the event is like a reminder for their healthy life. Actually, in the year of the Olympics, the number of members of gyms increases, and this is because the motivation actually works.
Meanwhile, the Olympics is not the only way to encourage people to live healthily. They first have to reduce their working hours and busy days to set aside time for doing exercise that they want whether it is from the Olympics or not. Without changing this lifestyle, they cannot continue to follow their plan that they set at the beginning of the year. (이 문단도 그렇지만, 글 전체적으로 너무 올림픽에만 맞춰서는 안 됩니다. 올림픽과 더불에 international games도 논제에 포함된 사항이므로, 이걸 꼭 맞춰주셔야 해요.)
In conclusion, I believe that people can do exercise and live a healthy life not because of the Olympics, but other factors. This is because it is an instant motivation and the actual inspiration comes from saving time for exercise. |