The plans below illustrate the comparison of the Grange Park park in 1920 and today. Overall, when it first opened (1920), there were not have any amenities (있긴 있습니다. many가 철자 오류 난 거면 얘기가 다르지만, 채점관들은 100이면 100 any라고 가정할 거에요.). On the other hand, today’s park has many of it.
When Grand park was first opened, there were three rose gardens, tow was were on the both sides of the north entrance, one was on the next to the other entrance. Furthermore, four seats were located on near the each rose gardens. they They had a stage for the musician, which was right next to the fountain.
However, in today’s Grange park, it has been (여기 포함, 이 문단의 다른데에도 시제는 싹 다 현재완료로 맞춰주시면 됩니다.) changed a lot. First of all, for the guests’ convenience, not only there are 4 seats near around the rose garden in the middle of the park but also they have two amenities such as a café and playing area for the children. Compared to before, they have a big stage has been made, which is amphitheater. To increase the accessibility, now they have an underground parking lot has been added.
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어디가 north 이고 south인지 알려주지 않은 상황에서 제가 어디가 north 라고 썼는데 괜찮을지 의문이네요 ㅜ
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