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In general, the advertising have influenced to humanity a lot since people started to trade merchandise with others. This being so, the advertising is still a great issue that people can face everyday in their daily lives. In these days, plenty of people regard the advertising extremely significant because the advertising can be a successful way to persuade people to buy some products. However, there are some people who criticize that advertising become so common that people don't pay attention to the advertising.
First of all, there are lots of people who believe that the advertising is a great method to persuade many people in society to buy products. These kinds of people might think the advertising can accelerate to show products or services to more people. Nowadays, plenty of people are still influenced by the special types of advertising in their daily lives. For instance, as technology develops people cannot avoid using social network service such as Instagram or Facebook. This being so, many marketers use some advertising on these kinds of social media, and they are able to make more profits because people use these types of social network service every day. Consequently, some people assert that the advertising is extremely successful at persuading people to buy things.
Secondly, there are also some people who insist tat the advertising cannot be the useful way anymore. These kinds of people believe that now there are a lot of advertising, and it becomes so common for attracting people's attention. Nowadays, there are many people who stop watching TV or using the Internet because they think those activities are waste of time, and also they assert that there are too many advertising when they do those kinds of activities. These people might think they don't want to pay attention to the advertising. For example, there are some people who don't want to watch some videos on YouTube because there are a lot of not interested advertising which distract people's watching. Finally, some people believe that advertising is so common to catch people's interest.
In my opinion, I would say that the advertising is still a great way and it will be remained as the greatest method to persuade many people in society to buy things. As the world changes rapidly, the advertising which are made by marketers develops consistently. This being so, there are many fresh advertising in these days, and it affect a lot in marketing. For example, there are many special platforms such as blogs, YouTube channel and Instagram. People now can make special advertising while using these kinds of platforms, and it accelerate a lot of people who watch these social communities in their daily lives. Ultimately, I would assert that the advertising is a successful method to persuade other people to buy lots of products.