Some people argue that parents have the most important role in their child’s development. However, others say that other factors like TV or peer groups have the most significant influence. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
When it comes to the best important role for their child’s growth is parents. There is a growing debate over whether television or friend groups are the most influence group for them than parents. Although parents are good for children’s education and development, ultimately learning education and growth with TV or other method are more important for them recently.
There is an opinion that parents are important for child during growing period. They could get a lot of information, manner, languages and so on from their parents before enter the school. They especially could learn mother tongue before make new friends and study at school. In this case, people think that parents’ role is very important for their child.
There are another opinion that TV or peer groups have most impact and influence for the child group. There are a lot of educations on the TV program and the Internet also has developed recently, there are various education methods for the child. Parents are not only important for them. Especially, there is YouTube which have much information so children can learn English, social trend and so on through the internet also. And also there are parents who can’t take care for them and doesn’t have much time spend with them, this will very useful and good for their child instead of them. And the child’s spend much more time with their friends than their parents after they grow up and effect from them.
In conclusion, there are convincing arguments both for and against parents have the most important role for their child’s development, but I am convinced that TV, peer group or the Internet have more effect on them than parents.
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