It is a common belief that giving children
rights to make their own decisions on their matters can make them selfish. However,
I firmly believe that it is very crucial for children to be fully developed mentally
and emotionally, thus they have to be given the right to make their own choices.
On the one hand, allowing children to make
decisions themselves can have adverse effects on their emotional developments.
Usually, this kind of behaviors can make them only concentrate on their needs.
In this process, children are likely to ignore other’s needs and opinions on
the matter even though the matter is also related to other people. Moreover, it
can lead to some severe problems about making relationships with friends or colleagues. Nevertheless, I support the idea that
making their own decisions on their issues would have significant impacts on their
developmental status positively. Through making decisions themselves, they can
realize about themselves such as their needs, personality, characteristics, and
so on. Therefore, they can enhance the a ability to make more proper decisions for themselves
over time. Take the example of In South Korea, parents in this country have
usually more power to make decisions on their children’s affairs. Mos children
are excluded except in the decision-making process. As AS a result, there are only a few opportunities opportunity
for children to identify their taste, characteristics, and interest. That is
why numerous younger generations have some difficulties to choose their career
path.
To sum up, while it is clear that encouraging
children to make their own decisions can make them excessive self-concentrated
people, it is undeniable that it can provide a great opportunity for children
to identify themselves and make better decisions for their life.
31분 소요되었습니다. 267단어 본론1에서 예시로 마땅히 떠오르는 것이 없어 쓰지않았습니다. 예시나 구체적인근거가 없는 것이 Band6점수를 얻는데 큰 영향을 미치는지가 궁금합니다. 항상 감사합니다.
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