Some people believe that it is good to
share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the
academic world.
Others believe that some information is too
important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own
opinion.
People’s opinions differ as to whether or
not it is great to share important knowledge in scientific research, business
and the academic world. I will discuss two different ideas and my personal view.
First of all, it is true that some
information is too precious or too vital to shared freely. This is because they
invested their cost their effort and spent time for their research in order to get
the knowledge. Not only that they think that some information about the company is
secret as necessary.
On the other hand, if they did not shard knowledge
and keep some secret information, it will be disappeared, also it cannot argue
that the knowledge is correct. Actually, there are many researchers and experts
in each filed, and they always study about their own research so they will be likely
to develop more advanced information by sharing them. For instance, there is someone
who had extraordinary heart cancer in China, and if Chinses doctors do not
know how to care and surgery about this cancer, it will be a serious situation.
However, if we shared in advance information about this cancer and other
diseases on the Internet form each country, they should care for their patients. It
is just an example of medical, sharing has a positive and vital impact on cutting-edge
technology and business as well as art.
To sum up, despite material into some information
is shared too precious, I believe that sharing valuable information and important
knowledge is a more effective and better way for our life these days.
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