The maps illustrate the layouts of a university’s sports
centre present and future.
Overall, it is clear that there are several changes around
the 25m pool. More rooms, halls, and studios will be built in near future.
Looking at the graph more closely, one can see that there is
the 25m pool in the middle of the map in present. Furthermore, there is the reception
at the south of the 25m pool. Changing room is located west side of the pool,
and seating is located in east side of the pool. Also, the gym is situated at northern
end of the sports centre. Lastly, there are two outdoor courts in the west and east
side, respectively.
According to the future plans, it is apparent that sport centre
size will be increased. The 25m pool, the changing room, the reception, the
seating will be secured old location. In contrast, size of the gym will be
increase. There will be located leisure pool in the western end of the pool. In
the eastern end of the pool, there will be located the two dance studios. Also,
two changing rooms will be added at the south western end and south east end of
the map. At the west side of the reception, there will be located the sports shop.
Lastly, the café will be situated east side of the reception.
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