Q. In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development?
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Nowadays, more and more small local shops begin to close their business due to shoppers' increasing consumption at large shopping centres or malls. In regard Regard to this trend, I strongly believe that this change is a negative development to local people. I will further outline my view below.
First of all, the recess of small shops in the local area can result in greater recession fo the local economy. It is because such small local shops are the ones which support the whole economy under the fundament. If we look into the connection or ecosystem of the shops, we can easily realize the interaction between local people. (일인칭 사용의 경우 정말 불가피할 때, 즉 내 의견임을 직접 명시하는 경우[서론의 두 I등]를 제외하면 가급적이면 안 써주시는 게 좋긴 합니다. 예를 들면 여기의 경우 When looking into the connection~으로 수정하면 조금 더 문어체에 가까운 표현으로 바뀌죠.) For instance, to exist in order for one business to exist, no matter how small it is, there are have to be several employees to work at the store. Therefore, if the store has no choice but to close closing, many employees who are local people also lose their jobs. At last, this series of joblessness can lead to the depression fo local economy.
Secondly, consumers may buy similar items without diversity as the small local shops disappear. One of th strenghth that the local shops have is originality. Each small shop normally has unique products with their own style and that's (줄임말은 풀어써주셔야 합니다.) why people could enjoy the varying choices. However, as the capitalism evades the local area, large shopping malls sell massive amount of products far from creativity and rarity. In the long run, the local people losing their unique small shops would have to buy items with same style of the trend.
In conclusion, the closure of small local shops is a negative development that harms the economy in the area, and the loss of diversity of items limits the choice by customers.
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