1. 라이팅에서의 목표점수: 6.5
2. 다음시험 날짜 그리고 위의 점수를 아무리 늦어도 언제까지는 만들어야 하는지: 최소 2021년 8월
3. 현재 글을 쓰는데에 몇분이 걸렸는지 + 단어수 + 외부도움: 20분 +193단어 + 외부도움X
4. 그 외 제가 알아두면 도움될만한 기타 정보나 현재 학생 여러분들의 공부상황: 영국대학 오퍼를 받았고 아이엘츠 제출을 위해 군대에서 독학중입니다 감사합니다
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My answer
The visual material below illustrates the figure about how plenty of people visited the Caribbean island during 2010 to 2017.
In general, we can immediately notice that the total number of people who visited a Caribbean island consistently increased between 2010 and 2017. Moreover, the number of visitors staying on island were bigger than the number of visitors staying on cruise ships until 2015, but since 2016 the figure of visitors staying on island become more tremendous than visitors staying on cruise ships.
First of all, people who went a Caribbean island continuously increased between 2010 and 2017. To be more specific, in 2010 visitors staying on cruise ships are approximately 1 million, but the total number of visitors in 2017 became 3.5 million which is triple compared to 2010.
Secondly, people who stayed on island increased until 2013, but the number of visitors who stay on island maintained 1.5 million for 3 years. On the other hand, the visitors who stayed on cruise ships had consistently risen since 2012. Consequently, the number of visitors who stayed on cruise ships become smaller than the figure of visitors who stayed on island after 2016.