In
some countries, it is a common belief that owning a house is more crucial than
renting one. This is because the speed of rising cost for buying a house is so
rapid that people think they will never be able to purchase one if they do not
hurry. I firmly believe that this is a negative situation regard to the overall
economy of a nation and people who live there.
To
begin with, people commonly think that they need to own their home for a stable
life as they get older. In case of renting a house, sometimes people have to move
to another place due to the landlord`s (키보드 1옆에 있는 거 말고, 엔터 옆에 있는 걸로 써주시면 됩니다. 전자는 영어에서 쓸 일은 없고, 다른 언어에서만 써요.) request. Therefore a lot of people try
to save money in order to buy their own house. However, in some countries such
as South Korea, the price of houses rapidly rise so that it takes too long to
prepare the money. This makes people to regard having a house more desperate in
their life.
On
the other hand, this situation can negatively affect the negatively overall national economy,
because people try to borrow a substantial amount of money in order to buy a house
from bank. It is financially risky for those who do not have a stable job and
it could become a fatal problem if the price of houses begin to fall. For example, in
2008, there was a huge financial crisis called Subprime Mortgage crisis in the
US, which it was caused by the situation that most of people were not able to
pay back their housing loan in a short period.
To
sum up, in some countries which house price rapidly rises like South Korea,
people think to purchase a house is very important for their stable life. However, it could be negative to the national economy, because there is a high
risk of over-loan from people who want to buy a house.
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목표점수 : 6.5~7.0
10/24에 시험이 있는데 처음 치는 거라서 목표점수를 어느정도로 잡아야 할지 모르겠습니다. 그동안 인강보면서 배운걸 오늘부터 하루에 하나씩 실전처럼 쓰고 첨삭받으면서 다듬어 보려고 합니다. 시간도 더 줄여야겠지요ㅜ
총평: (7/7/6/7) 7.0
야옹이님의 경우, 일단 기본 문법이 어느정도 깔끔한 편이라 10월 24일에 시간만 잘 맞추시면 6.5는 받으실 것 같습니다. 물론, 제가 지금은 딱 한 세트의 글만 보고 말씀드리는 것이긴 하지만요. 고로 목표는 지금의 6.5~7.0으로 잡으시면 좋을 것 같아요. 6.5는 웬만하면 보장이므로, 일단 저는 7.0이라고 가정하고 맞춰드리겠습니다.
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