Topic : Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
One of the main reasons why advertisements has been successful in regards to driving people to purchase commodity is the increase of rates in employees relaxing in front of Tv, which might improve economic growth. For example, there has been the prevalent provide of Tv due to the developed technology. This results in the ease that earner is exposed to advertisement when they are home after their work. The exposition of advertisement could make many earners purchase products not only because of the temptation advertisement are giving but also in order to relieve their stress consequent upon their work piled up. In this regard, this could contribute to the distribution of money.
On the other hand, The principal reason why society do not pay attention to the advertisement is that the missing information of advertisement in promoting products, which could be a risk of aggravating people’s health For instance, many advertisements tend to exaggerate their food in terms of the quality of it, resources and do not fill in sufficient information on labels . According to the survey conducted at Tesco, it is highly likely that people do not read the label when they purchase goods. This can be fatal to people’s health who have certain allergy, such as wheat allergy due to misinformation and missing information provided on food.
In conclusion, although people have different perspectives regarding the effect of advertisement, I strongly believe that the success in persuading people to buy goods is more advantageous in terms of economic view. Therefore, people should place the value on the benefit of the advertisement.
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