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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible
in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that
some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss
both these views and give your own opinion.
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There are
those who feel that announcing to the public about changes in industries is salient.
As for other people, they against the standpoint. Although it is a controversial
subject, I have an inclined notion towards in favor of sharing the
information freely, in order to garner a variety of viewpoints from people. In
this essay, points of view of the polar opponents will be discussed alongside
my opinion.
On one hand, some people generally believe
that distributing too much information regarding society can be debacles. One
reason can be that administration intend to pursue the solidarity in the nation.
For example, even though there is increasing tension between South and North
Korea due to the provocation of North Korea, diplomats put their efforts to reconcile
their relationships. However, if those stages are not classified as secrecy, some
people might commit a demonstration to against it, the other people who advocate
the government’s decision incur the conflict with those protests. The other
reason is that some information may bring chaos in society. A few years ago, a
huge comet passed the orbit of the Earth where the Earth arrived the place after
two weeks. At that time, Nasa did not announce the fact in order not to make disorders
among people.
On the flip side, this is my belief that governments
or organizations should be open-minded to share the prime information to the public.
Firstly, human beings now confront Coronavirus which is the highly contagious
virus in human history and countries in the world condemned the government of
the People’s Republic of China. This is because the core administration of
China did not share the information of the virus internationally in an expeditious
manner, innumerable patients are suffering from respiratory ailments and it also
causes the pandemic crisis on the Earth. To find the countermeasure, scores
of scientists who has different nationalities glean knowledge. Secondly, as every
community member conducts an imperative role in their area and also pays
taxes to advocate other fields, I deeply consider that releasing information
to the public is basic rights of people.
In condensation, even though releasing
information may arise the confusion or mess in society, I firmly convinced
that the public has right to know the information and those people might come
up with new ideas to settle down the issue and forge the solidarity in society.
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