Some older people struggle with the use of modern electronic technology such as smartphone and computers. Why do you think this is happening? Suggest way to encourage them to use mobile phones and new technology for their benefits.
These days, it is quite a huge issue that older people are isolated from the world that is composed of various the number of electronic technology. As the gap between young people and older people is increasing, it leads to an inequality of information. Most of the elderly feel difficulties of older people are feel difficulty to use the devices and these problems should be solved in terms of companies and individuals.
First of all, older people usually have physical difficulties difficulty so that they cannot follow the development of electronics. This is because most customers of electronic devices are young people so the companies develop devices focused just on them. Thus, older people quit to use the mobile phones because they cannot read the small texts and listen properly. In addition, these days, older people are used to direct communication communicate with a person so it is they are not familiar with robots. These technologies are a technology is totally different world which means that they have to learn from the bottom.
To solve this problem, it is required in terms of the corporations and individuals. Firstly, companies have to develop electronic devices for older people. The device should have larger fonts size and easy process to use. In some countries, older people cannot understand the meaning of the words of English, so it should be changed into their own languages. In addition, older people have to make efforts as well too. There are many classes for older people to learn how to use a computer so it is quite practical to them.
To sum up, most older people is suffered are suffering from the world of electronic technology. This is because of their health conditions and it should be solved from the companies’ efforts such as developing devices for older people. Also, individuals themselves and individuals itself that can learn in a easy way.
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