Your Answer ▼ Some people believe that accepting is the best way when you (2인칭은 구어 축에 속하므로 따로 쓰지 않는 게 좋긴 한데, 사실 5.5에서 별 중요한 사항은 아닙니다.) undergo bad situations. However, I believe that it is much better to try to change situations and improvement. First of all, some people commonly believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job. Most people have to pay the bills for rent or insurance, taxes, and so on. Therefore, people usually want to consistent income to their account. That is brought This can bring stability and comfort to their life as the regular salary even if they felt undervalue or usefulness in work.
For example, my best friend is a nurse and works in a hospital but, she did not want to be a nursewasn’t want to be. However, she needed a She needs to steady job and has a loan for college fees and a house so, she couldn’t (줄임말은 풀어써주셔야 합니다.) quit the job easily. Some people are satisfied with reality also, those who don’t like changing and worry about change. Nevertheless, I support the idea that it is better to try and improve such situations. A proactive attitude led to finding solutions and positive results when you face a situation that wouldn’t be expected. For instance, un-employees who want to develop skills or start their own business for getting a job also, employees those who need to earn more money so, they get a second job or work overtime. (여기는 어떤 의미로 적어주셨나요? 댓글 주시면 확인하고 수정해드리겠습니다.) Facing the situations and struggle to a better environment for their life. To sum up, while it is apparent that acceptance is the best solution when you get in a bad situation, it is undeniable that it is better to effort and improve such situations.
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