Some people believe that it is neither possible nor useful for a country to provide university places with high proportion to young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is a common belief that it is impossible nor helpful to provide university places with high proportion to students and young people by the government. I strongly agree with the opinion, and in this essay, I would represent some reasons for my belief.
To begin with, these days, many students have tended to go to university because their parents and teachers recommend, also they do not know what they do when students graduate excepted some students who have certain plan. If these students go to the university and the government support them, it takes a lot of money and many people would claim. This is because most students want to apply high quality school but that areas are limited. Furthermore, most citizens would assert that it is unfair, high proportion university should be offered students who have precise qualify with grade or verification.
On top of that, there are more significant issues that the government should attention than affording the university places to young people. Actually, the government ought to perceive other factors like the environment of offering workplace to public because both are the important problems these days. The issues that providing university areas should be solved by high school administers and the student’s parents because they know more about student’s detail like grade.
To sum up, offering university areas with proportion to young people should care by the student’s parents and their high school teachers. This is because the government should care other more significant things like environmental issues or affording works to unemployed, also it takes much money. For these reasons, I firmly agree with the problem that it is neither possible nor useful for a country to provide university places with high proportion to young people.
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