The charts give information about three
types of unhealthy nutrients in four different meals in the USA. Overall,
sodium and saturated fat consumption followed similar patterns. On the other
hand, added sugar had the opposite (이거 학생들이 많이 틀리는 사항이므로 주의해주셔야 합니다. '반대' 와 '다른' 은 전혀 다른 사항이며, 여기의 경우 후자를 써주셔야 해요.) consumption patterns.
The highest proportion in both sodium and
saturated fat was shown in were dinner, which it accounted for 43%, 37% respectively. This this was
followed by lunch with 29% sodium and 26% saturated fat. The levels of the
sodium were same for breakfast and snacks were the same in sodium (둘은 의미가 전혀 다릅니다. 혹시 어떻게 다른지 모르시겠다면 댓글 한번 주세요!) (14%). While Meanwhile, Americans consumed more
fat for snacks (21%) than for breakfast (16%).
Unlike the other two nutrients, the highest
proportion of four typical meals in sugar was from snacks, which was 42%. The next
highest was dinner at 23%. The percentage of the other typical meals was quite
similar, lunch was at 19%, breakfast at 16%. Breakfast was accounted for the
lowest percentage. When they eat breakfast, Americans consumed the smallest
added sugar among four typical meals. (앞이랑 같은 말입니다.)
파트 1 오랜만에 써봤습니다! ->이제 슬슬 시험이 다가오고 있으니까, 이전처럼 하나에 몰빵하지 마시고 하루~이틀에 한 세트(1+2)씩 푸는 걸 목표로 해주세요! 이제 실전 감각도 쌓으셔야합니다.
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총평: (6/7/6/6) 6.5
서론에 제가 표시해드린 부분은, 마치 한국 사람들이 흔히 '다름' 을 '틀림' 으로 잘못 사용하는 것과 비슷하다고 보시면 됩니다. opposite과 different 역시 다르므로 주의해주세요! 엄밀히 따지자면 후자가 더 상위의 개념입니다.
수고하셨습니다 :)