Your Answer ▼ It is true that the online studying is becoming a common feature of education in university nowadays. I believe that studying online is a negative development as it has a limited way of teaching students whilst others argue otherwise. This essay will thus be dealing with my perspective and other's about online studying.
On the one hand, I reckon (어느정도 구어에 해당하는 표현이라, 가급적이면 쓰지 않는다고 생각하시면 됩니다.) studying online is a new way of studying that may manage the time for both teachers and students. However, I would say it is a negative development and a great disadvantage for students as they can not learn specific things that might require a practical work such as surgery for the medical students. To add to that, it would be difficult to learn those practical work by online, therefore, it is essential for students to gain experiences and knowledge by doing the actual lessons in order to succeed (이거 학생들이 되게 많이 틀립니다. 주의해주세요!) success in their job.
Although I stated the drawbacks of online studying is a negative development, I respect others who argue that it is a significant development as it is convenient for studying anywhere, anytime where student goes as long as they are holding their laptop. Additionally, it is also helpful to the old students or disabled students who can barely move to school which means they can study more comfortable. (지워진 부분에 대해서는 밑에서 말씀드리겠습니다.)
In conclusion, many people, including me think that studying online is a negative development whereas others think opposite. Although it is a negative development for now, I believe this kind of education technology will develop more and more and eventually, everyone will agree with new type of education in the near future. (논제는 미래에 이게 어떨지에 대해서 전혀 물은 적이 없습니다. 그냥 긍정적인지 부정적인지에 대해서만 생각을 밝히고 끝내시면 돼요.)
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