▶ Your Answer :The pie chart represents the information on what types of movies 100 school going children prefer. There are seven types involved, comedy, action, romance, drama, horror, foreign and science fiction. Over a quarter of children preferred comedy movies while 18% had a preference for action movies. (영어는 숫자 자체로 문장을 시작하지 않습니다. 숫자로 문장을 시작 하고싶으시면 글로 써주셔야합니다)>14% of the whole opted for romance movies and the proportion of drama movies was 14 % as well, and 11% of them selected horror movies. As figures of romance and drama movies were the with same each other, foreign movies and science fiction took place on the identical percentage of 18% As can be seen, the majority of preferences inclined to comedy and drama, while science fiction and foreign movies did not seem seem not to be able to draw attention to children. It can be taken into account like that, many of school going children were keen on watching comedy and action movies, whereas not much on horror, foreign and science fiction.
Score: 6.5 Comment: 잘 서술 해주셨습니다. 정보를 조금 더 비교를 해주시면 좋을 것 같습니다. 예를 들어 그저 percentage만 전달해주시기 보다는 most popular/least popular을 전달 해주시면 좋을 것 같습니다. 수고 하셨습니다. |