Many companies sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves. Some people think this is good for the world of sport, while others think it is negative. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There is a disagreement regarding the issue of sponsoring sports. Some people believe it is an opportunity that boosts athletic ability through the sponsor while others assert that brings negative effects and it would be meaningless. I will consider both opinions and suggest my own idea.
First and foremost,
sponsor from companies would be helpful to sport players. There are many sport
players who are very talented, but sometimes players give up and quit sports the
reason of financial problem. However, if large firms sponsor the world of sports,
the institution of sports would provide better facilities to players and players
do not have to worry about the financial issue and are able to focus on their
sports. In addition, this is a chance to promote companies if they sponsor
sports. Usually, there is a company’s name on the players’ uniforms, so the audience
might have an interest in companies.
On the other hand,
there would be negative effects on the world of sports. If a company sponsor
amount of money for sport institution, they would feel secured because they do
not have worry about financial matters, so it could be loose up and players
might not practice hard and neglected. Moreover, the way of using money could
make an argument with employees in sports institutions and players.
In conclusion,
there are merits and drawbacks by a company sponsoring sports. Nevertheless, I strongly
believe that companies sponsor have great effects on the world of sport,
including players. If a company enables sponsor for sport teams, it would be
positive in diverse ways.
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