The line graph illustrates how many travelers
visited to a peculiar particular Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017.
Overall, the figure for the total of visitors to a Caribbean island significantly increased for 7 years.
Looking at the line graph below closely, in
2010 there were 1 Million million (다른데에도 싹 다 소문자 시작해주시면 됩니다.) total visitors in a Caribbean island, and approximately 0.75
Million of them stayed on cruise ships, whereas the rest of them on island. The
quantity of travelers staying on the island slightly increased from 2011 to 2013
with almost 1.5 Million and started to stabilize at 1.5 Million for 3years. There
was a small amount of decrease and increase of visitors staying on island by
roughly each 0.25 Million during 2015 and 2017 with 1.5 Million. In this period,
it was noticeable that there was the same level of visitors staying on island
as of staying on cruise ship at about 1.4 Million. Although the amount of
people staying on cruise ships slightly fluctuated from 0.25 Million to 0.5
Million until 2012, afterwards there stared to be an upward trend, reaching at 2 million 2Millions
in the final year.
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총평: (6/7/6/6) 6.5
이번 글은 6.5이긴 한데 조금 아슬아슬한 감은 있습니다.
task1에서 증감을 다룰 일은 매우 많은데, 이때 increase와 decrease의 동의어는 꽤 많이 존재하므로 잘 익혀주시면 좋습니다. 단위 표현에도 신경써주시고요!
수고하셨습니다 :)