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It is true that the number of extinct
animals has been increasing in the contemporary days. There has been a much discussion
revolving around the issue of which subject’ problems should be mitigated first, between humans or these animals. Personally, I steadfastly believe that endangered
animals should be a priority.
On the one hand, some argue that human’s
problems are more urgent than other matters. This is because there are still numerous
problems which are not appropriately dealt throughout the world. These directly
give detrimental impacts on individuals’ daily lives. For example, a number of
citizens in developing countries are suffering from famine and poor living
conditions. In addition, crime, welfare as well as food are also other staple
problems which should be solved. In order to get to the better life, these
problems should be resolved first.
However, since every creature is in one
ecosystem, if one specie becomes extinct, it gives negative influences on the
overall ecosystem. This is why people have to save the endangered (한번 틀리시면 실수일 수 있지만, 두 번 틀리면 아직 모르는 게 되므로 따로 정리해놓으세요!) animals first.
For instance, once an animal in the Amazon become extinct, its predators and preys get
a great deal of impacts such as the number of them and habitats (이거에 대한 어떠한 영향인지를 적어주셔야 합니다.). It also affects
negatively to human beings because they live on these animals and plants as their
staple foods. As a result, as any extinction of an animal specie can derive the overall
ecosystem’s unbalance, people should give importance on saving these animals. (여기서 엔터 한번 더 쳐주세요!)
In conclusion, even if human beings’ problems
remained steadily and become worse, it is undeniable that protecting endanger
animals are by far the significant because it can derive (아까 쓰인 표현이므로 대체해주시면 좋습니다.) overall ecosystem’s destructions. |