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Some people say that organizing your places at your house and your office is important. I completely agree with the opinion that it is important to maintain cleaning your place clean.
On the other hand, some people insist that keeping cleaning our houses and workplaces is not necessary because we use many products and documents all day. It must turn out messy again so throwing away waste is enough to clean, not important to clean up all the places.
In my view, however, we should try to keep cleaning our houses and workplaces even though it is becomes messy again. Because when we stay in tidy spaces, we feel more fresh and comfortable so we can more concentrate on our work or study there. Another reason is that organizing all items lead us to find something more easily when we need them. For example, we could find something harder if we do not organize ingredients in the kitchen when we cook. Also, in the workplace, we may not find well if we do not tidy our documentation at workplaces. Many reports already show that organizing and cleaning well at their places, makes people work more efficiently. Finally, the last reason why we keep maintaining tidy places is that we usually live and work with others. If we do not tidy our places, it could lead to others feeling uncomfortable because people usually assume that sharing places with others has to be cleaned.
In conclusion, I strongly agree with the opinion that people should try to keep clean and tidy at their houses and workplaces for their efficient lives.
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