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There are various opinions about the proposed question. In South Korea, children are usually told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. In terms of education system of South Korea, this is because Korean parents tend to care about their children’s academic performance and education circumstances. This has both advantageous and disadvantageous traits at the same time. In the aspect of advantageous trait of the question, Korean children can be motivated and encouraged to focus on their study.(문장을 연결해주세요) Because giving students this message inspires them to put consistent effort into their subjects. This will result in better academic performance and they will also have more confidence in the future. For example, I used to teach English at private institution. One of the students had hard times for in studying English and had low self-esteem about himself. So I kept motivating him, saying that you can get better score if you study English hard. Finally, he received the score that he had wanted to achieve by working hard-spending much more hours on studying and memorizing as many as vocabularies as possible. Therefore, giving students motivational message is advantageous in terms of improving their confidence and academic performance. However, in the aspect of disadvantageous trait of the question, Children can jeopardize themselves under a lot of pressure and stress. For example, there is always external factor which cannot be changed or physical factor which cannot be changed in some circumstances. Take P.E. class at school as an example. Student who is much taller than other students is more likely to be good at playing basketball. In this situation, telling the shortest student who is often told that he or she can be the best basketball player in class will make the student depressed and hopeless even though this is not his or her fault. Therefore, motivational message can be dangerous because this will give children hopelessness rather than confidence. In conclusion, government and organizations should plan educational system which not only give students enough motivation and encouragement but also realize them realistic truth. - 제 목표는 안정적 6.5입니다. 피드백 주시면 감사하겠습니다! |