▶ Your Answer :
There are a various roles and
responsibilities for the government to be followed. As the technology develops
due to the globalization, the government spending on to the internet has been biased. Even though, this expenditure improved the quality of the internet to
increase the work efficiency, this should be returned to its the original place, to
the publics.
Due to the globalization, the technology
developed. This technology has enhanced the standard of living by the
improvement of the internet quality. Faster speed, stable connections and
persistent speed might be the results from this investment. People might
achieve a the task more effectively without wasting time on physical work. The
improvement in work efficiency will influence in the economic growth. Thus, the
government can meet the globalized standards. To do that, the government may
have to spend a lot of money.
(Need better transition)
The government spending would be needed in
various places such as health, education, technology, science, transportation,
property and economy. If the government only focuses on the internet
improvement, other parts of section will suffer from further development. All
sectors are needed the government’s money/support for better lifestyles. To meet all
these requirements, the government should not spend too much money on the
internet.
In my perspective, since the government had
accumulated the money from citizens in the form of tax, it should return to the
society in a various ways; science, health, education, technology and
environment. All those areas are required a bit of government’s expenditure for
the maintenance and for the improvements. Even though the internet is on the
one of the government’s spending list, the government must distribute their
expenditures across the fields.
In conclusion, the government has been
spending a lot of money for the improvement of the quality of internet. It
could be beneficial for the country in a short term for the faster achievement
of work and economic growth. However, after fields will eventually require of
government’s patronage for the improvement. Therefore, it would be better to
distribute the money throughout various sectors.
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