Your Answer ▼ It is certainly true that most of the world's poor live in countries where tourism is a growth industry. It can either generated a number of benefits or it can worsen make many poverty.
There are some way to generate the income in a growth industry. First of all, the government can help them to get a job or make money. For example, if the government provides a subsidy, a lot of poor will be able to solve their economic problem. They can support their family, also can save themselves. In addition, if company companies employ people who are poor in some kinds of parts, including a museum or tourism sites, a number of poor can work steadily. These solutions will be able to earn bring numerous benefits for the poor in growth industry countries.
However, in spite of these solutions, countries where tourism is a growth industry still have problems which are the destruction of traditional cultures a growth industry countries have still problem which are destroyed traditional cultures. To solve these problem, the government should focus on their original traditional culture. For instance, if the government and company collaborate to make audio and books also souvenirs concerning their own traditional customs, and then they sell to tourists who want to know it, it will be able to make lots of profits to help poor in country (빈곤층을 돕는 것에 대한 사항은 본론1에 요구되는 내용입니다.). In addition, introducing the famous tourism sites, many tourists will be interested in our traditional culture.
In conclusion, as the government and some companies help to them, with the help of the government and some companies, a country can develop their own industry, the income can is also be generated steadily, and poor can live better in a growth industry country.
저번 시험결과에서 writing에서 실수를 많이 했던것 같아요. 시험보고 나서 생각해보니 housing에 대해서 쓰는건데 제가 생각해도 오프토픽으로 작성한것 같아서 5.5는 안되겠구나 하고 있었는데 5점이 나와서 8월초에 다시한번 볼생각으로 공부를 하려구요. 문법공부는 지금 처음부터 다시 꾸준히 하고있는 상태입니다. 목표점수는 5.5였는데 6.0까지 끌어올리고 싶어요! 다른과목들은 0.5점씩 상승해서 괜찮았구요. at least 점수가 각각 5.5점이 되야한다고 하더라구요. 다음 시험때 다른과목이 떨어질 수가 있어서 라이팅도 6.0 목표로 열심히 공부하겠습니다 !
네 흇지님 오랜만에 오셨네요! 시험 치르느라 고생 많으셨습니다. 일단 어느정도 오프토픽이었는지는 제가 알 길이 없지만, 아마 다음 글에서 못해도 5.5는 나올 거에요. 그래도 일단은 저와 함께 6.0을 목표로 열심히 해주시면 되겠습니다.
문법의 경우 너무 빡세게 하실 필요는 없습니다. 만약에 each 6.5, 7.0에 걸리셨다면 제가 하루 10시간 문법을 스파르타로 잡으라고 말씀드렸겠지만, 그런 상황이 아니기 때문에 그냥 매일매일 조금씩만 해주셔도 무방해요. 대신 꾸준히는 해주셔야 합니다 :) |