Q ; The advent of the Internet has made it possible for people to work from home. Do you feel this working arrangement has more advantages or dis-advantages? Share personal examples in your essay.
There has been a controversial issue over whether or not what outcome is comes out from working at home as the advances of Internet. Not only do some people claim that people need to work at their workplace not a home, but also others point out that it is helpful to get a lot of benefits from working at home. In my opinion, I would firmly argue that all of these aspects are our inevitable responsibilities which hold advantages and disadvantages at the same time.
To begin with, it is not strange to say that there are some drawbacks on working at home. First of all, because of using laptop computer and cell-phone for contacting their customers or coworkers at their home, the workers need to pay more electric bill than before. Furthermore, there should be some incidents which are disconnecting internet, sending additional email about important contracts and so on. Lastly, they are sometimes impossible to separate between work and house from contacting customers and receiving their packages simultaneously.
Nevertheless, there is a huge amount of advantages from work at home. First of all, all of homeworkers do not need to commute. In other words, there is no wasting time of dressing nicely and waiting on the roads for a long time. Sitting in front of their laptop or iPad with neat looks is their only work at the morning. In addition, it would be getting less pollution than time working at their workplace. By doing not use their car, buses or trains to work, pollution which comes from this phenomenon is going to downward. Nowadays, it is clear that expanding the number of homeworkers has a lot of efficient and straightforward advantages.
In short, both opponents and proponents have debated over this disputable issue and both sides seem to have good reasons to support their arguments. From practical and effective advantages of working at home, however, I would be confident that people and our society will benefit from carrying out this working arrangement and getting more positive change.
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