students have a wide source of information, so teachers are no longer important in modern education. Do you agree or disagree?
With developed technology, many students nowadays can have a variety of choices to receive information and learn new things individually compared to the past. Some people believe that the role of teachers is not imperative anymore in the recent education system, however, I do not agree with this statement because they are not only providing not only information to students but also emotional in-depth development by consulting and guiding their students.
To begin with, it is true that children nowadays tend to depend on technological machines and devices to get information. In spite of accepting a wide range of information, students often get confused and fall for wrong discoveries. Even though students could connect to the Internet any time to get useful up-to-date news and tips, they could have difficulties with understanding deeper knowledge without explanations. Therefore, teachers should be in the classroom to help students out by directing the right methods and paths to let them study in a better way.
Moreover, teachers are not only having not only serve a role of teaching but also providing various feedback as a mentor in emotional areas as well as educational fields. When students have concerns or worries about their school life and educational progress, they often look for their teachers to get decent answers. They could ask for some assistance from their peers and parents, but they know a fact for the one who can have better answers for them could be teachers because they have been observed the students closely, directly, and specifically.
In conclusion, although the role of teachers has been decreased because of enhanced online learning methods, teachers are still vital for massive students since they could guide students to become outstanding society members by communicating with each other.
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