▶ Your Answer :
Since the development of technologies, the
internet has helped grasping the information easily. Nowadays, reading is
possible through the internet. Despite this convenience, reading through the
internet is difficult. This essay will discuss how the internet will abandon of
people’s reading habit.
Internet is a visual way of showing the
information while books are in a descriptive <(descriptive what?). Therefore, readers have to
visualize the scene from the words. People may require converting the words to
the image process, so it takes more steps for the understandability than that
of internet. The More processes are required for people when they read a book,
so many people use the internet for the convenience and massive information. However, the internet would simplify
people’s brain activities. The internet contains a lot of data in a various
ways such as pictures, videos and words for people to easily understand the
meaning. If people get used to this simplified process, they may not be able to
think in depth, which is required for the reading. They may not be able to
understand the actual meaning of the story within a book. Since there is a
difficulty in understanding of the story, people may not find an interest in
reading. Further to this, internet could minimize
people’s concentration skills. Reading requires a great concentration skill in
order to follow the story of the book as well as figure out the author’s
intention (the actual meaning of the story). In comparison, internet is like a
Pandora box. Internet has many other contents that are more entertaining for
people. From social networking sites, to Youtube, and to emails are a great example
for this. The exposing of the Pandora box, which is contains full of
entertainment, may prevents people to sit down and read a book.
In conclusion, although internet contains
massive amount of educational materials, it also has a lot of other contents
for entertain purposes. The exposure to the internet could prevents people from having reading habits because reading a book requires concentration and
imagination skills from people but the simplification and the significant amount of information available through the internet hinder these skills .
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