▶ Your Answer : The pie charts show the the different purpose of water usage in six areas in the world. Overall, Central Asia used the most water for agricultural use than any other areas in the world whereas they used the least amount of water for industrial use among other six areas. In the case of North and South America, water usage comprised at 48% of total usage is been used in the North America industry, whereas only 10% of the whole water is been used for the South America industry. (영어는 숫자로 문장을 시작하지 않습니다. 숫자로 문장을 시작하실려면 글로 써주셔야합니다)>39% of water has been used for agriculture in North America, and almost twice as much has is been used in South America for the same purpose. There is only a slight difference are slight differences for domestic usage for both countries. In the case of Europe and Africa, water usage made up at 53% of the total usage in Europe for industry, whereas only 7% of water is been used for the same purpose in Africa. Less than half of total water usage comprised up for agricultural use in Europe, whereas most of the water have been used for agriculture in Africa. Only 15% and 9% of water have been used for domestic use in Europe and Africa, respectively. In the case of Central Asia and South East Asia, most of the water have been used in agricultural use, whereas they both used only 7% of the total water in domestic. Water for industry only comprised of 5% and 12% respectively 7% of the total water amount of water in both countries.
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