While some people argue that a high school should involve free social activities in their process, in my perspectivel, I completely disagree with this point of view.
To start with, making unpaid community programs provide stressful lives for students. In fact, the majority of students do not have enough time to do because there are a lot of assignments and studies arealdy which they have to finish in a day. Especially, plenty of unpaid community services such as working for a charity, teaching sports to young children require much time for it. If schools force children to do unpaid community service, they will suffer with school class and assignments plus charity works. Furthermore, the leisure time is disapeared because of the unpaid community service which means that studnets can not afford to feel refresh from their works. As a result, stressful situation will provide health problems to children.
In addition, the biggest problems of this free community programs to students mindsets. To elaborate, the essence of free social activities is valuntary, but making it to be a compulsory process of their high-schools is aginst towards fundamental reason of free social activities. Students with no passion for helping people can influence to certain people who recieve aids. For example, if a certain student who does not concentrate on valunteering, teach how to play sports to small kids, kids might be same as past sports skills. This phenomenon can cause children to waste their important to time to waste.
In conclusion, it seems to me that unpaid social community programmes should depend on children’s choice. Because forcing it as mandatory to children can lead students to suffer with insufficient times and rosing the meaning of nopaid social services as well.
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