■ Direction· Task 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words.
· Task 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
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INTERNATIONAL ENGLISH LANGUAGE TESTING SYSTEM WRITING ANSWER BOOKLET Candidate Name:텍스트 | Candidate Number:텍스트 | Centre Number:텍스트1 | Date:텍스트1 |
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Topic ▼ some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, change is always a good thing. Discuss both this views and give your own opinion |
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Your Answer ▼Many people believe that it is better to live life without making changes. However, other people believe that making changes is a good thing. I am going to discuss both opinions and then share my own views on this topic.
The reason many people do not make changes is because they feel stable with their life already. They are satisfied with their current state. These people already feel like they have reached their goals, so they do not have any reasons to make changes to their life. According to a recent study, it shows over half of the Vietnamese(비엣나미즈) population Is content(만족하다) with fixed incomes and jobs. They do not have to worry because their job is secure. Also, most of them do not want to change anything in their life due to risk.
The other viewpoint Is that making change is a good thing. Trying new things will be more beneficial in finding success. An American saying goes like this, “Knowledge is power.” If they try new things, they get new information to live by. They also learn more about society and diverse experiences. I believe, success is not achieved without experimenting with new ideas and practices.
In conclusion, there are convincing arguments for making changes and not making changes. However, I am convinced that making change to broaden people’s views and perspectives will produce the best results in life |
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채점 기준 | TR (Task Response) | CC (Coherence and Cohesion) | LR (Lexical Resource) | GRA (Grammatical Range and Accuracy) | Total |
Score (9점 만점) | 6 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 6 |
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변화에 대한 양측의 관점을 글쓴이만의 입장에서 잘 풀어서 설명해주신 좋은 글 써 주셨습니다. 결론에서 글쓴이의 의견을 한 문장으로 요약 정리해주셨는데 그렇게 하시기보다는 좀 더 풀어서 두 세 문장으로 설명해주신다면 더욱 좋은 글이 될 수 있을 것 같습니다. 수고하셨습니다.